Sunday, August 4, 2013

Tanka



                                                     hay bales
                                                     in a sun-drenched field
                                                     goldenrod waving;
                                                     we pass it by knowing
                                                     tomorrow will bring changes

Kernels, #  1 April 2013

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8 comments:

Gillena Cox said...

drenched in summer, yet not stayed; your tanka is awesome


much love...

Adelaide said...

Thank you, Gillena.

Adelaide

Bill said...

That is a beautiful and evocative photo

gone . . .
that cloud I wished
you could see

Adelaide said...

Thank you, Bill for your comments and your lovely haiku.

Adelaide

Margie said...

I grew up with lots of hay bales.
This brings back wonderful memories.

Adelaide said...

Although I've seen the hay bales in the fields, I've yet to see them being formed. I've always driven by too late.

Adelaide

Frank... said...

Beautiful photo & words, Adelaide...

Adelaide said...

Thank you, Frank.

Adelaide

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