tree lined Main Street
on this summer afternoon
only the air moves
hot and humid
another day
dripping summer
sticky heat
at the family dinner
a pot boils over
Pipe Dreams, 9/26/2011
A Hundred Gourds, 9/2012
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8 comments:
I love the way you've work-shopped the photo. Adelaide - it looks just like a drawing; and to accompany it a very nice sequence of haiku.
Thank you, Frank.
I wish I could draw like this, but alas...I can only work-shop the photos I take.
Adelaide
Thank you, Bill.
Have a good holiday weekend.
Adelaide
rain drops
fall through the evening leaves
a cricket
__A humble thought, left in complement Adelaide. _m
I particularly like your last one, which I remember from Presence.
Thank you Magyar and Janet, and for your complimentary haiku, Magyar.
Adelaide
its extremely hot here in T&T right now
much love...
I hope you cool off soon.
We are having some good weather for a change.
Adelaide
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