Thursday, January 31, 2013

Tanka



                                          through stained glass windows
                                          rainbow lights for the bride
                                          reciting the vows
                                          I slip my hand in yours
                                          saying words said years before

Stylus Poetry Journal March  2003
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7 comments:

Bill said...

The almost circular shape of the window seems especially appropriate to the theme of the poem.

Adelaide said...

Thanks, Bill, and thanks for visiting.

Adelaide

Warren said...

Wonderful, Adelaide - your artistry and poetic insight are always a joy to read. Thanks for sharing your talent.

P.S. - My muse, or at least my creativity, have returned.

Warren

Adelaide said...

Thank you, Warren. Gland to know you are writing again.

Seems like we will have an early spring, that is, if the ground hog is correct.

Adelaide

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Adelaide said...

Thanks for your comment. I don't often get comments on older posts.

Adelaide

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