Tuesday, January 29, 2019

Tanka


eons and eons
wearing away time and rocks
long before we were born
was it a plan ordained
that we met that summer night?




concrete tunnels
the hard shapes of steel and glass
reaching upward
a manmade world
connected by sky

Modern English Tanka
Moonbathing

9 comments:

Adelaide said...
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Lowcarb team member said...

I enjoyed these, thank you.

All the best Jan

Sandy said...

Yes, probably to the first. That is a beautiful place, by the way.

I love the light in the photo of the second tanka. Even though, I am not much of a city person, this poem with stay in my mind.

Adelaide said...

Thank you, Jan and Sandt

Adelaide

Magyar said...

Both... well seen and valued, Adelaide!

Adelaide said...

Thank you, Magyar

Warren said...

Hi Adelaide- I still love your work. I consider you a mentor. I've started up a blog after mindlessly allowing my old one to lapse. Find it at https://www.sliverofthemoon.org/.

Warren

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