Sunday, October 2, 2011

Haibun



                                           WHAT THERE IS…

in new grass in the scent of lilacs carried by breezes in hills of rocks and wild flowers in the silkiness of a blue sky in a road curving gently down to a green valley in slow moving horses grazing in a field in the smell of black dirt and fresh manure

                                            highway rumble–
                                       in the rear-view mirror
                                            the fading sunset

Hoi Polloi, Autumn 2009



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4 comments:

Gillena Cox said...

really entertaining haibun; i enjoyed the writing style of your prose and the surprise in Line 3 of your haiku is truly interesting

much love...

Adelaide said...

Thank you, Gillena. I appreciate your comments.

Adelaide

Kristin Riggs said...

You paint the most wonderful pictures with you words, Adelaide. I enjoy your work every time!

Kristin

Adelaide said...

Thank you, Kristin.

Adelaide