WHAT THERE IS…
in new grass in the scent of lilacs carried by breezes in hills of rocks and wild flowers in the silkiness of a blue sky in a road curving gently down to a green valley in slow moving horses grazing in a field in the smell of black dirt and fresh manure
highway rumble–
in the rear-view mirrorthe fading sunset
Hoi Polloi, Autumn 2009
4 comments:
really entertaining haibun; i enjoyed the writing style of your prose and the surprise in Line 3 of your haiku is truly interesting
much love...
Thank you, Gillena. I appreciate your comments.
Adelaide
You paint the most wonderful pictures with you words, Adelaide. I enjoy your work every time!
Kristin
Thank you, Kristin.
Adelaide
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