Friday, May 13, 2011

Tanka

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it was her month
this May of blossoms
and fragrances:
the softness of these days
was in her voice and smile

Ribbons, September 2007

7 comments:

Devika Jyothi said...

That was beautiful one, Adelaide :)

wishes,
devika

Gillena Cox said...

delightful :)

much love

Adelaide said...

Thank you, Devika and Gillena.

Adelaide

Bill said...

Gentle and moving

Adelaide said...

Thanks, Bill.

Adelaide

Warren said...

This is such a beautiful tanka and image - you are a true artist, Adelaide.

Warren

Adelaide said...

Thank you, Warren, for this and for your other comments.

Adelaide

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