Wednesday, October 1, 2008

WHITE PETALS

A few tanka


mid-afternoon
the sun still warm
so late in autumn
a gentle slowing down
nothing to do but give in
Modern English Tanka, Summer 2007

newly married-
a Friday night date
at the Laundromat
we hold hands
between cycles
Moonset, Nov. 2007


hydrangea bush-
one blue blossom
amidst the pink;
how strange it is
to be so alone
Red Lights, Jan. 2008




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3 comments:

robert d. wilson said...

Nice, Adelaide. Your blog is well laid out and it's always a joy to read your poetry.

Robert D. Wilson

Issa's Untidy Hut said...

Adelaide:

Very nice serendipitous segue from one post to another ...

"after lunch"

and

"mid-afternoon"

I'm going to add your blog to the list on "Issa's Untidy Hut."

Don @ Lilliput Review

Adelaide said...

Hi Don,

Thanks for commenting. I put Issa's Untidy Hut on my Favorite links.

Adelaide