Wednesday, October 25, 2023

Tanka


 my perfect garden
til a deer and her fawn
nibble on the hosts:
the flash of anger gone
when they turn and look at me
Treveni

4 comments:

Gillena Cox said...

Nice one Adelaide.

Much💛love

Adelaide said...

Thank you, Gillena

Adelaide

Magyar said...

that glance to my lens
her cub stepped into shadows
easy steps away

... Let me wonder, is it sha-DOWS... or sha-DOZE?

Smiles.... ! _m

Adelaide said...

the young ones are a bit shy

Thanks Doug

Adelaide

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