cave echoes
my mistakes
come rushing back
receding tide
in the rocks
part of each wave
Frogpond, 2014
HSA Anthology 2015
Haibun
Odysse y An elusive floating. I reach out and clasp sunbeams. I move forward, searching for I know not what, yet, understanding...
6 comments:
Wow - I love both of these haiku, Adelaide - especially the first one. Both go so well with your graphic. Keep up the wonderful work!
Warren
__ I thank you for understanding Adelaide, I wish for you and yours, a Nifty New Year_!
I choose silent caution, to minimize the rumble of negative ecoes.
echoes resound
forever betwixt our ears
silent caution
thank you, WArren. HAppy to hear from you
Adelaide
Magyar--thank you for your haiku
Adelaide
To the first one- Yes! Yes!
We tend to forget what is heading away from us, don't we?
I almost missed these in the rush of the storm we just had.
thanks, Sandy. I haven’t been out of the house for a week. Ah....spring! Where are you?
Adelaide
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