Wednesday, December 27, 2017

Haiku


cave echoes
my mistakes
come rushing back

receding tide
in the rocks
part of each wave

Frogpond, 2014
HSA Anthology 2015

7 comments:

Warren said...

Wow - I love both of these haiku, Adelaide - especially the first one. Both go so well with your graphic. Keep up the wonderful work!

Warren

Magyar said...

__ I thank you for understanding Adelaide, I wish for you and yours, a Nifty New Year_!

I choose silent caution, to minimize the rumble of negative ecoes.

echoes resound
forever betwixt our ears
silent caution

Adelaide said...

thank you, WArren. HAppy to hear from you
Adelaide

Adelaide said...

Magyar--thank you for your haiku

Adelaide

Gillena Cox said...

Thank you for participating in The Twelve Days of Christmas at Lunch Break

much love...

Sandy said...

To the first one- Yes! Yes!

We tend to forget what is heading away from us, don't we?

I almost missed these in the rush of the storm we just had.

Adelaide said...

thanks, Sandy. I haven’t been out of the house for a week. Ah....spring! Where are you?

Adelaide