Saturday, February 18, 2017

Haibun


                                              RACHMANINOFF PIANO CONCERTO No.2     

There is drama in the opening chords.  The piano alone— six times the same chord, beginning pianissimo, getting louder with each repetition.  Then a sweeping blend of violins and piano.  I listen and forget the arduous task I’m doing, peddling my exercise bike.  The music lifts me beyond  the mundane aspects of daily life.

                                              icy sleet
                                              on the windows—
                                              empty bird feeder

Now an introduction of horns and full orchestra.  The piano, romantic in tone.  A quiet orchestral melody.  Hollywood borrowed the melody for a film years ago.  Everyone of a certain age would know it.

I’m there in the concert hall.  Spotlight on the pianist, his head bent over the keys, fingers flying. The audience is in shadow. All still but for the occasional  cough or sneeze.  Bike exercise completed, I remain listening.  An increased tempo in the third movement.    Passages of piano fireworks, each note quick, clear and sharp.  I’ve listened to this so often I can anticipate each phrase, each note.  Then the full orchestra again, soaring with the melody and finally closing with a strong crescendo.

                                                   with gloved hands
                                                   spilling bird seed—
                                                   sleet down my collar


World Haiku Review, March 2003

2 comments:

janetld said...

I'm glad you were able to go to such a stunning concert … without leaving your exercise bike! My new treadmill is soon to be delivered. I'm supposed to ride it for 3-45 min. each day. Maybe I'll need to imagine I'm at a concert!

Adelaide said...

Music helps, but there is no denying it, exercise is boring. I got rid of the exercise bike and the treadmill, along with my guilt for not exercising. Just keeping up with the house is exercise enough.

Adelaide

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