Wednesday, May 21, 2014

Senryu



                                                    a Pollack painting–
                                                    the three year old says
                                                    "Mine is better."

                                                    the puppy
                                                    after breaking wind
                                                    barks at his rump

                                                    balancing accounts
                                                    the temperature drops
                                                    a few more degrees
Kernels, 4/13
Kernels, 4/13
Bottle Rockets, 2/14

8 comments:

Frank... said...

3 fine haiku, Adelaide. Love the humour in the first one...

Adelaide said...

Thanks, Frank. Glad it gave you a smile.

Adelaide

Nick said...

Fine work, wry humour. Nice.

Adelaide said...

Thank you, Nick. I''m glad you stopped by for a visit.

Adelaide

Gillena Cox said...

luv the first one best of this lot; smiles


much love...

Adelaide said...

Thank you, Gillena

Adelaide

janetld said...

All of these gave me a smile, Adelaide!

Adelaide said...

Thanks, Janet. Now and again I get a funny thought which becomes a senryu.

Adelaide