Thursday, April 23, 2009

Three Senryu

the clam dig;
three cracked shells,
ten broken nails

heated discussion-
two young men pause
for girl watching

teenage couple-
the crisscross flutter
of hormones
3 Lights Gallery, March 2009


Frank... said...

I love the humour in the second senyru. Although the two men are arguing, the girl walking past in some way unites them, if only albeit for a short while.

Anonymous said...

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Anonymous said...

Just discovered your blog, love your work. This set of three is charming - humorous and sharply observed.