Saturday, February 22, 2014

Haiku


                                                               snow day
                                                            remembering
                                                           when it was fun
Shiki Kukai, March 2012





7 comments:

Frank... said...

The photo does seem to show rather a grim day. For me personally snow looks nice on a Christmas card. Hope things improve for you soon. Nice post though, Adelaide...

Gillena Cox said...

(◕‿◕。) have a nice Tuesday

Much Love…

Adelaide said...

Thanks for visiting, Frank and Gillena. Winter is still with us. More snow on Wednesday.

Adelaide

Regina Piroska (Gina) said...

snow day
remembering
when it was fun


Shiki Kukai, March 2012

lovely .... and somehow wistful
we who do not have to live in it find it romantic, far away, (and fun) ...

a nice reminder why memories are.

i do like the definite pause between line 1 and the rest. >>> Gina

Adelaide said...

Thank you, Gina. I hope you visit again.

Adelaide

janetld said...

This certainly brings back memories of a couple of snow days in third or fourth grade. It
WAS fun. I like the contrast btw your photo and L3 of the haiku.

Adelaide said...

Thanks, Janet. Sorry to take so long to reply, but we were without a computer for over a week.

Adelaide

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