Monday, November 11, 2013

Haiku


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                                                 sweeping leaves
                                                 from the patio
                                                 helped by the wind

                                                 through a doorway
                                                 a whiff of decaying leaves
                                                 in the morning dampness


Stylus Poetry Journal, Nov. 2004
Hokku Web Page, Dec. 2003

5 comments:

Frank... said...

Love the colours in your photo Adelaide. Poems compliment your photo well...

Warren said...

What a gorgeous image, Adelaide - and your poems are terrific - spot-on!

Warren

Adelaide said...

Thank you both. Glad to hear from you again, Warren.

Adelaide

Gillena Cox said...

the animation, the appeal to sense of smell and those grand colours in the photo; a wholesome package

much love...

Adelaide said...

Thanks, Gillena. I always appreciate your comments.

Adelaide