Monday, February 20, 2023

Tanka


dripping icicles
the slippery patches
on flagstones:
I navigate life's hazards
more slowly now
Modern English Tanka

4 comments:

Magyar said...

parallels
such icicle smiles
drip to drip

Earth's blood
water flowing onward
primes other life

__! Thank you Adelaide: there are more echos to your photo-verse _m

Gillena Cox said...

Ah yes the process of aging is sharply contrasted in the recurring of a season.

Much❤love

Adelaide said...

Thank you, Doug for your haiku response

Adelaide

Adelaide said...

Thank you, Gillena

Adelaide

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