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Tanka
a brisk autumn walk the muddy blend of colors deepens my mood where are the highlights and bright spots of yesterday? Ribbons:Tanka Cafe
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oh, this wind! it sweeps me past my gate then spins me home spring clean-up- in the sweat of hard work a settling peace solid gray sky- fors...
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Hi Adelaide
the pond
circled by the poet
becomes an ocean
The late Lary Fraser, my friend and mentor, told me that every body of water in her poems was based on the pond in her back yard.
Where I lived before, this wa one of the ponds I passed every day. This is what it looks like after heavy rains and humidity. The pond swinks when the rain is less. It changed its appearance throughout the year.
Thanks for commenting and for your haiku. With imagenation, one pond can become any body of water.
Adelaide
Oh, I like that pond! The haiku is lovely as well. The best of summer!
Thanks,Sandy. Hoping to be cooler tomorrow.
Adelaide
Luv the Basho nostalgia, and roses picked.
much love...
thank you, Gillena.
Adelaide
__ Nice trio Adelaide, and in this triplet I see that Basho's splash! _m
Thanks, Magyar. That frog gets around.
Adelaide
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