Tuesday, August 23, 2016

Haibun



                                                      BEING ALIVE

 Unrelenting heat. The old man with dazed eyes accepts an ice cream. The first taste sends a flicker of acknowledgement and pleasure. Although I don’t know this man or the woman who is helping him, I feel the sting of tears.

I am afraid to see myself in his role, afraid to think of a life imprisoned by mind and body, afraid to think of needing constant care and attention.

                                                    sweat between my breasts
                                                    the unpleasant awareness
                                                    of being alive

CHO, Oct. 2013

4 comments:

Gillena Cox said...

We don't ever want to think that far along the way, maybe we don't need too;
very thought provoking haibun

much love...

Adelaide said...

Thanks, Gillena, for your comments.

Adelaide

Bill said...

A resonant moment.

Adelaide said...

Thanks, Bill. just got my computer back after beings weeks without it.

Adelaide

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