Sunday, January 4, 2015

Haiku

 

                                               party over
                                               the snap crackle of logs
                                               in an empty room

                                               non-stop snow
                                               we pass each other going
                                               from room to room

                                               fresh snow
                                               beginning the new year
                                               with a clean slate

Magnapoets, spring 2012
HSA Anthology 2008(revised)
Shiki Kukai, Jan. 2012

4 comments:

Bill said...

Nice work, Adelaide. Happy new year.

Gillena Cox said...

Luv the first one best, i think it's because of the sound input

Happy New Year

Much love ...

Adelaide said...

Thank you Bill and Gillena.
And a Happy New Year to you both.

Adelaide

Adelaide said...

Hi Janet,

For some unknown reason your comment doesn't show here, but I read it. We had rain on Christmas Eve; the snow came in the New Year along with zero degrees.
Happy New Year to you and your family.

Adelaide

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