Wednesday, May 28, 2014

Haibun


                                                A GOOD NIGHT’S SLEEP

   Still awake… a calm lake, clear reflections, soft breezes….I drift
   Still awake…I am now by the sea, waves gently lapping against rocks, 
          the splash and gurgle…
   Still awake…hilltop vistas, rolling green hills, waving grasses           
   Still awake….

                                                         first light
                                           tickling the edges of sky
                                                    fly on my nose
Frogpond, 2010

 

2 comments:

Gillena Cox said...

Luv how the "tickling" pivots

Much love...

Adelaide said...

Magee...for some reason your comment won't post, but I thank you for commenting.

Gillena, I thank you, also.

Adelaide

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