DUSK
It is quiet now. No
cars on the road. No neighbors
about. The light is going. Overhead, a solid cloud cover. A breeze stirs the pines creating a rushing
sound as of a stream pulsing over rocks. After a few seconds it reaches the
copper chimes on the porch, sounding its bell tones, low and fleeting.
summer rain–
the gentle way
- you touch my hand
One Hundred Gourds, 9/2012
6 comments:
Lovely, Adelaide!
Thank you, Maggie.
Adelaide
A super haibun, Adelaide...
Thank you, Frank.
Adelaide
this is a sweet romantic piece, i especially like the resonance of mood in the text and the ku
much love...
Thank you, Gillena
Adelaide
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