A DRIVE IN THE JURA MOUNTAINS
It is a
gray Saturday, hardly a picture postcard kind of day. We decide to ignore the weather and venture
forth. Behind us are the Alps and Lac
Leman; ahead of us rise the Jura.
layers
of mountains
fused
with mist…the cloud peaks
Our destination—nowhere in particular.
flower
splashes
spilling
out of windowsfilling the gardens
stone
houses,
their
crumbling walls patchedwith geraniums
Jumping a
hundred years we pass tractors and binding machines. Twentieth century noises blending with
timeless rural sounds: cows with
clanging bells munching grass, raucous crows brazenly flapping after a tractor. And everywhere smells punctuating what we see
and hear.
from
an open barn
the
odor of hay and manureand climbing roses
We pass
through a winter sports town. Ski runs,
now grassy slopes, the skating rink a meadow wild with flowers and colored
banners announcing the kermesse(village
fair).
with
easy swiftness
summer
touristswalk the ski runs
We stop by
a thick grove of beech trees.
looking
for sky,
seeing
only mossy trunksand wild ivy
the
seeping dampness
sitting
on wet rocks…the hot coffee
Voices….another family in the woods.
gathering
berries,
listening
to the plink, plink,then silence
We start
back but are soon slowed.
plot,
plop on the road…
cars
follow the cow trailto the milking barn
Late
afternoon, the mist fading, outlines appear.
The glue-grayness gives way to the greens and gold of the wheat and corn
fields checker boarding the hills. Our
perseverance is rewarded by a weak sun.
clearing skiessummer comes dribbling
between storms
10 comments:
A little odyssey. Well done.
Thanks, Bill. This was a long time ago, the 1st or 2nd attempt at haibun.
Adelaide
Marvelous work, this extended haibun, Ms Shaw. I'm glad I found you.
I'm honored to share a page with you in the current World Haiku Review. Your work there really resonates with me (and My Beloved Sandra) as gardeners of a certain, increasingly creaky, age. Salute!
PS: in that regard (ie gardening) you might enjoy this: BY THE DOZENS
Thank you, Ron. I shall check out By the Dozens. Gardening is pleasurable, but in recent years, the end result more so than the work.
Adelaide
i like thie winter
between haiku blogs
dribbling
STOPS
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Thank you for visiting my blog.
Adelaide
I enjoyed reading about your journey through the Jura. :)
Thank you, Janet.
Adelaide
The image of the barn looks like an enormous gaping mouth, it's satiety is accomplished in so much to gather and engulf in your haibun tryst
enjoyed!
much love...
Thank you, Gillena.
Happy Easter.
Adelaide
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