Friday, October 12, 2012

Haiku



                                      October rain
                                      splashing red and gold
                                      on the brick path

                                      breathing
                                      the sharpness of autumn
                                      no words spoken

                                      early morning light
                                      filtered through autumn's trees
                                      your waking smile


Gean, December 2011
The Country and Abroad, September 2007
Pipe Dream, September 2011

8 comments:

Frank... said...

Lovely colours in your photo, Iris. Three very nice haiku, in particular the first...

Frank... said...

Sorry, meant to say Adelaide...

Adelaide said...

Thanks, Frank. As my uncle used to say, Call me anything, but don't call be late for dinner.

Adelaide

Frank... said...

Thanks Adelaide...

Gillena Cox said...

beautiful autumn in colour and haiku

much love...

Adelaide said...

Thank you, Gillena. Up here we just going past peak color.

Adelaide

Bill said...

Rich and mellow. We haven't reached peak yet.

Adelaide said...

Thanks Bill for visiting

Adelaide

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