an ant in my bed-
for the two of us
not enough room
the evening woods
filling my mind with quiet
and my hair with gnats
World Haiku Review Senryu contest
honorable mention
work of merit
December 2003
Tanka
a brisk autumn walk the muddy blend of colors deepens my mood where are the highlights and bright spots of yesterday? Ribbons:Tanka Cafe
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oh, this wind! it sweeps me past my gate then spins me home spring clean-up- in the sweat of hard work a settling peace solid gray sky- fors...
4 comments:
haiku really is about the little things in life, isnt it?
You're right, Emma, and some of those little things can be amusing.
Adelaide
lovely both and they can also fit the labels haikai; enjoyed the wit
much love...
Thanks, Gillena. Yes, these can do double duty as either senryu or haiku.
Adelaide
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