an ant in my bed-
for the two of us
not enough room
the evening woods
filling my mind with quiet
and my hair with gnats
World Haiku Review Senryu contest
honorable mention
work of merit
December 2003
Haibun
TAKING STOCK Something left unsaid or incorrectly said. Some decision made or not made. A false start or no start. A wrong step. A mista...
4 comments:
haiku really is about the little things in life, isnt it?
You're right, Emma, and some of those little things can be amusing.
Adelaide
lovely both and they can also fit the labels haikai; enjoyed the wit
much love...
Thanks, Gillena. Yes, these can do double duty as either senryu or haiku.
Adelaide
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