an ant in my bed-
for the two of us
not enough room
the evening woods
filling my mind with quiet
and my hair with gnats
World Haiku Review Senryu contest
honorable mention
work of merit
December 2003
Tanka
a tree canopy in autumn’s palette this cool dawn I need no more stimuli than the turn of a leaf Kernels
4 comments:
haiku really is about the little things in life, isnt it?
You're right, Emma, and some of those little things can be amusing.
Adelaide
lovely both and they can also fit the labels haikai; enjoyed the wit
much love...
Thanks, Gillena. Yes, these can do double duty as either senryu or haiku.
Adelaide
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