teenaged girls like talk to each other and like to their friends on their cell phones they like tell each other like everything that they like are thinking and are like trying to like talk above and like over the others without like pausing for like a breath with a sudden movement one girl like gets up and like slings her large bag like over her shoulder and like walks away soon the others like follow and the plaza is like quiet
plaza fountain
a steady sprinkling of dropson the pavement
Simply Haiku, Sept. 2010
4 comments:
The ku is a surprising but apt partner to the prose.
first car
she takes her cell phone
for a spin
You got that right. Good haiku.
Adelaide
you got it like, just the way they say it
a lovely comment on modern day youth jargon
made me like smile too :)
much love...
Like, thank you, Gillena.
Adelaide
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