Saturday, November 26, 2011

Tanka



a country road
through the dun colored landscape
of November
chimney smoke stirs a desire
to return home

Magnapoets Antholoogy 2009
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4 comments:

Gillena Cox said...

emotions well crafted

much love...

Adelaide said...

Thanks, Gillena.

Adelaide

Bill said...

An emotionally recognizable moment, Adelaide. Well done.

Adelaide said...

Thanks, Bill.

Adelaide

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