THE GOOD LIFE
everything you need everything you want at the mall clothes for school clothes for work at the mall running shoes party shoes fill your house your garage at the mall come today come tomorrow hang out here meet your friends at the mall short of cash charge it now at the mall everything you need everything you want at the mall
indoor garden
the artificial color
of roses
Simply Haiku, March 2011
4 comments:
nice back to school piece; really like the presentation of your rose image
much love
gillena
thank you, Gillena.
Adelaide
The placing of "artificial" is very effective. The prose is a bit more poetic than is common in haibun, and it works.
Thanks Bill. Glad to stopped by.
Adelaide
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