Daily Haiga, October 2013
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trees and more trees brush against my window feeling like a bird seeing what it sees when out on a limb Red Lights
trees and more trees brush against my window feeling like a bird seeing what it sees when out on a limb Red Lights
5 comments:
The match of image and verse is eloquent.
Thank you, Bill.
Adelaide
the juxtaposition of meeting of friends and season changes is nicely wrought here
much love...
"...meet..." The sound of this verb works very well in the last line. You can hear that it's a long time and this makes the line before ("stretches across miles") even stronger.
Thank you, Gillena.
Thank you, Haiku-shelf (I don't know what else to call you. I'm glad you visited.
Adelaide
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