Saturday, July 13, 2013

Haibun



                                             DUSK 

It is quiet now.  No cars on the road.  No neighbors about.  The light is going.  Overhead, a solid cloud cover.  A breeze stirs the pines creating a rushing sound as of a stream pulsing over rocks. After a few seconds it reaches the copper chimes on the porch, sounding its bell tones, low and fleeting.

                                      summer rain–
                                      the gentle way
       -                              you touch my hand 

One Hundred Gourds, 9/2012

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6 comments:

maggie said...

Lovely, Adelaide!

Adelaide said...

Thank you, Maggie.

Adelaide

Frank... said...

A super haibun, Adelaide...

Adelaide said...

Thank you, Frank.

Adelaide

Gillena Cox said...

this is a sweet romantic piece, i especially like the resonance of mood in the text and the ku


much love...

Adelaide said...

Thank you, Gillena

Adelaide

Tanka

  trees and more trees brush against my window feeling like a bird seeing what it sees when out on a limb Red Lights