Thursday, January 21, 2010

in ancient poems
the highs and lows of desire
and human nature;
my life a repetition
of well-told tales

Ribbons, winter 2010

7 comments:

Devika Jyothi said...

well said, Adelaide :)

I have always felt like that...They have all have said it all so well out there,

wishes,
devika

Adelaide said...

Thanks, Devika. It's not easy to create something new.

Adelaide

Lorena said...

this is lovely, I can totally relate

Adelaide said...

Thank you, Lorena, for all your comments on so many of my posts.
You are doing great work with those poor animanls at the shelter. We'd love to have a dog, but it wouldn't be fair to the animal since we are out so much of the time, and that includes spontaneous overnight trips.

Adelaide

bandit said...

Nice! So eloquent, this draws the reader in, so they might all relate something from their personal lives.
You ain't just whistling Dixie, sister.

Adelaide said...

Thank you, Bandit.

And thank you, Gilena.

You posted a comment and when I went to save it, for some reason, it disappeared. Sorry about that, but thanks for stopping by.

Adelaide

Adelaide said...

I don't know your name, but thank you.

Adelaide

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