eons and eons
wearing away time and rocks
long before we were born
was it a plan ordained
that we met that summer night?
concrete tunnels
the hard shapes of steel and glass
reaching upward
a manmade world
connected by sky
Modern English Tanka
Moonbathing
9 comments:
I enjoyed these, thank you.
All the best Jan
Yes, probably to the first. That is a beautiful place, by the way.
I love the light in the photo of the second tanka. Even though, I am not much of a city person, this poem with stay in my mind.
Thank you, Jan and Sandt
Adelaide
Both... well seen and valued, Adelaide!
Thank you, Magyar
Hi Adelaide- I still love your work. I consider you a mentor. I've started up a blog after mindlessly allowing my old one to lapse. Find it at https://www.sliverofthemoon.org/.
Warren
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