moonlight
blue-black shadows
across the snow;
daylight shapes become
my new ghosts
Modern English Tanka
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a brisk autumn walk the muddy blend of colors deepens my mood where are the highlights and bright spots of yesterday? Ribbons:Tanka Cafe
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oh, this wind! it sweeps me past my gate then spins me home spring clean-up- in the sweat of hard work a settling peace solid gray sky- fors...
3 comments:
Wow, does this paint a picture! I love tracks in the snow, and shadows I can identify.
I haven't done a tanka in years. Love yours.
Thank you Sandy. we haven't had a real snow yet, just small one inch snowfalls which melt by next day. Of course, there's lots of winter yet.
Adelaide
Thanks, Melbourne Taxi . How did you find my blog?
Adelaide
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