Tuesday, August 28, 2018

Tanka


tea roses
the heart of the garden
was her presence
still growing in abundance
missing their sweetness

Ribbons 2017

4 comments:

Magyar said...

Nice Adelaide.
__ I offer this... imagined echo. _m

with the gone
in such songs of memory
new blooms

Adelaide said...

Thank you for your contribution

Adelaide

Gillena Cox said...

fragrant roses -
the wind spreads a presence
for all to savour


Much💗love

Adelaide said...

Thank you, Gillena, for your haiku

Adelaide

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