White Petals: Haiku

Wednesday, December 27, 2017

cave echoes

my mistakes

come rushing back

receding tide

in the rocks

part of each wave

Frogpond, 2014

HSA Anthology 2015

Warren said...: Wow - I love both of these haiku, Adelaide - especially the first one. Both go so well with your graphic. Keep up the wonderful work!

Warren; December 29, 2017 at 5:16 PM
Magyar said...: __ I thank you for understanding Adelaide, I wish for you and yours, a Nifty New Year_!

I choose silent caution, to minimize the rumble of negative ecoes.

echoes resound
forever betwixt our ears
silent caution; December 29, 2017 at 5:52 PM
Adelaide said...: thank you, WArren. HAppy to hear from you
Adelaide; December 29, 2017 at 10:32 PM
Adelaide said...: Magyar--thank you for your haiku

Adelaide; December 29, 2017 at 10:34 PM
Sandy said...: To the first one- Yes! Yes!

We tend to forget what is heading away from us, don't we?

I almost missed these in the rush of the storm we just had.; January 9, 2018 at 10:22 AM
Adelaide said...: thanks, Sandy. I haven’t been out of the house for a week. Ah....spring! Where are you?

Adelaide; January 9, 2018 at 9:19 PM