Daily Haiga, October 2013
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Tanka
a brisk autumn walk the muddy blend of colors deepens my mood where are the highlights and bright spots of yesterday? Ribbons:Tanka Cafe
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oh, this wind! it sweeps me past my gate then spins me home spring clean-up- in the sweat of hard work a settling peace solid gray sky- fors...
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The match of image and verse is eloquent.
Thank you, Bill.
Adelaide
the juxtaposition of meeting of friends and season changes is nicely wrought here
much love...
"...meet..." The sound of this verb works very well in the last line. You can hear that it's a long time and this makes the line before ("stretches across miles") even stronger.
Thank you, Gillena.
Thank you, Haiku-shelf (I don't know what else to call you. I'm glad you visited.
Adelaide
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