Daily Haiga, October 2013
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TAKING STOCK Something left unsaid or incorrectly said. Some decision made or not made. A false start or no start. A wrong step. A mista...
TAKING STOCK Something left unsaid or incorrectly said. Some decision made or not made. A false start or no start. A wrong step. A mista...
5 comments:
The match of image and verse is eloquent.
Thank you, Bill.
Adelaide
the juxtaposition of meeting of friends and season changes is nicely wrought here
much love...
"...meet..." The sound of this verb works very well in the last line. You can hear that it's a long time and this makes the line before ("stretches across miles") even stronger.
Thank you, Gillena.
Thank you, Haiku-shelf (I don't know what else to call you. I'm glad you visited.
Adelaide
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