sweeping leaves
from the patio
helped by the wind
through a doorway
a whiff of decaying leaves
in the morning dampness
Stylus Poetry Journal, Nov. 2004
Hokku Web Page, Dec. 2003
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Tanka
a brisk autumn walk the muddy blend of colors deepens my mood where are the highlights and bright spots of yesterday? Ribbons:Tanka Cafe
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oh, this wind! it sweeps me past my gate then spins me home spring clean-up- in the sweat of hard work a settling peace solid gray sky- fors...
5 comments:
Love the colours in your photo Adelaide. Poems compliment your photo well...
What a gorgeous image, Adelaide - and your poems are terrific - spot-on!
Warren
Thank you both. Glad to hear from you again, Warren.
Adelaide
the animation, the appeal to sense of smell and those grand colours in the photo; a wholesome package
much love...
Thanks, Gillena. I always appreciate your comments.
Adelaide
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