morning mist
the tick...tick
of leaves falling
morning sharpness
rain soaked leaves
sticking where they fall
turning the corner
crimson maple trees
dripping rain
Heron's Nest, Oct. 2002
Daily Haiku, Oct. 30, 2009
Dragonfly, Jan 1974
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a brisk autumn walk the muddy blend of colors deepens my mood where are the highlights and bright spots of yesterday? Ribbons:Tanka Cafe
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oh, this wind! it sweeps me past my gate then spins me home spring clean-up- in the sweat of hard work a settling peace solid gray sky- fors...
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Three beauties. Hard to pick a favorite. I like that "tick - tick." But the sharpness in the second one really does it for me
we had a lot of rain this week but today is blistering hot; have a nice Thursday
much love...
Thanks Bill and Gillena. It won't be long now before we get that real morning sharpness.
Adelaide
Autumn is now well under way now Adelaide. I like the first poem very much,'the tick...tick' is a good way to describe leaves falling through mist...
Thank you, Frank, for stopping by.
We are beginning to see some color here.
Adelaide
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