Saturday, April 27, 2013

Haiku


                                    sky and pond
                                 newly green willows
                                     nearly touch

Daily Haiku, 6/2011
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4 comments:

Bill said...

The image forms in the mind. "newly . . . nearly" play well together.

Adelaide said...

Thanks, Bill, for your comment.

Adelaide

Warren said...

Gorgeous and insightful - as your poems always are, Adelaide - you're a painter with words and I appreciate you for sharing so much of your talent.

Warren

Adelaide said...

Thank you, Warren, for your kind words.

Adelaide

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