WINTER DAWN
Neither birds, nor
wind, nor humans moving in the smoky grayness.
A duvet of white spread across the landscape. All shapes softened, angles rounded. Fences and
obstacles obliterated opening the way to forever.
a chugging plow
begins the climb uphill–
feet on the cold floor
Contemporary Haibun Online, April 2012
6 comments:
like the haiku, point-of-sound-entry
much love...
Thanks, Gillena. We haven't had very much snow as of yet, but lots of cold, cold winds and temps at night down to zero.
Adelaide
A gorgeous winter commentary - Adelaide, you are a master with the words and moods. I always enjoy the feelings you convey - thanks for the read.
Warren
Thank you, Warren, for your generous comments.
Adelaide
As Warren said, 'A gorgeous winter commentary',Adelaide. Stay warm...
Thanks, Frank.
Adelaide
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