first day of spring
daffodils flown in
from Ireland
a sun-gold morning
rain soaked dafodils
lose their droop
a wild daffodil
in the ravine-
the distance I've come
Simply Haiku, March 2011
Haiku Society of America, Anthology 2011
Acorn, Winter 2010
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Tanka
a brisk autumn walk the muddy blend of colors deepens my mood where are the highlights and bright spots of yesterday? Ribbons:Tanka Cafe
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oh, this wind! it sweeps me past my gate then spins me home spring clean-up- in the sweat of hard work a settling peace solid gray sky- fors...
7 comments:
A very nice sequence of haiku, Adelaide. Your photo has the feel-good factor in abundance...
Thank you Frank. Yes, spring flowers have the capacity to cheer even the gloomiest person, I think.
Adelaide
nicely done ; your spring sequence is not without surprises, enjoyed the daffodil flown in
much love...
A very good group. Each one has its own tone, "personality."
Thank you Gillena and Bill.
This blustery cold wind we've been having is not doing my daffodils any good.
Adelaide
I like these ones.
Thank you.
Adelaide
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