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Brrr looks cold. Roles do shift in life; very nice poem, Adelaide...
Thanks, Frank. It's a wise parent who can listen to his child.Adelaide
this is fine as is, Adelaide, but stop after line 3, and you have a good senryu.
Hi Bill, You're right. Thanks.Adelaide
nice one Adelaide; guess it just sneaks up on you, then too you know you trained rightmuch love...
I guess we did train them right.Thanks for visiting.Adelaide
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Brrr looks cold. Roles do shift in life; very nice poem, Adelaide...
Thanks, Frank. It's a wise parent who can listen to his child.
Adelaide
this is fine as is, Adelaide, but stop after line 3, and you have a good senryu.
Hi Bill,
You're right. Thanks.
Adelaide
nice one Adelaide; guess it just sneaks up on you, then too you know you trained right
much love...
I guess we did train them right.
Thanks for visiting.
Adelaide
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