Sunday, January 1, 2012

Tanka

New Year's ritual-
resolutions written down
in a neat hand;
so much easier to read
and break

Modern English Tanka, October 2008

4 comments:

Gillena Cox said...

precisely;

thats why i do not make new years resolutions

much love...

Adelaide said...

Thanks for stopping by, Gillena.

Adelaide

Bill said...

the turn on "neat hand" is elegant. all he best.

Adelaide said...

Thanks, Bill. Happy New Year.

Adelaide

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