oh, this wind!
it sweeps me past my gate
then spins me home
spring clean-up-
in the sweat of hard work
a settling peace
solid gray sky-
forsythia buds
for a blue vase
Haiku Highlights, 1971
3 Lights Gallery, summer 2009
Shamrock, summer 2010
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a brisk autumn walk the muddy blend of colors deepens my mood where are the highlights and bright spots of yesterday? Ribbons:Tanka Cafe
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oh, this wind! it sweeps me past my gate then spins me home spring clean-up- in the sweat of hard work a settling peace solid gray sky- fors...
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this one's my favourite
"spring clean-up-
in the sweat of hard work
a settling peace"
the haiku, not the activity :)
much love...
There is a satisfaction, as well, when the job is finished.
thanks, Gillena.
Adelaide
A very nice trio, Adelaide...
Thanks, Frank.
Adelaide
Adelaide, love the image you paint in the last haiku...captures all the happiness that spring brings!
Thank you, Jill.
Today, and for the next couple of days, spring will be taking a step backwards. However, my forsythia buds are opening up inside.
Adelaide
This is springtime perfection! I love it, Adelaide!!! Truly wonderful work! :)
Sincerely,
Kristin
Thank you, Kristin. Happy you stopped by.
Adelaide
Your forsythia buds are lovely today!
Spring greetings,
willie
Thank you, Willie. The greetings of spring to you, too.
Adelaide
lovely. I like how you make the housework beautiful
Thank you, Lorena
Adelaide
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