sleet and rain-
stirring extra sugar
into hot mush
all day long
the rhythmic beat
of melting ice
blank date book-
the gray afternoon
turns to white
Modern Haiku
Acorn
Chrysanthemum
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Tanka
pushing through the day small reminders of age force a slower pace this season os winter becomes a quieter time Presence
6 comments:
An evocative haiga, Adelaide...
Thank you, Frank. A lot more winter still to come.
Adelaide
three is my favourite "blank..." for its skillful resonance
---much love---
Thank you, Gillena.
Adelaide
very nice, I like the way you jazzed up a winters day. I can almost see the jazz music cover for a band called Hot Mush and a title track called "extra sugar" !
Thanks, Lorena. Here's to Hot Mush and "extra sugar" and the hit parade.
Adelaide
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