Tuesday, December 7, 2010

Late Autumn Haiku


shadow mountains
along the lake
the mist rising

Taj Mahal Review, December 2008

space between trees–
the rhythm of two hawks
wheeling

Daily Haiku, cycle 8

tea with lemon–
slipping under the door
a cold draft

Ambrosia, #1 fall 2009

3 comments:

Frank... said...

Three very nice haiku, Adelaide; in particular I like the line 'slipping under the door’. That’s what drafts do...

Adelaide said...

and that's what I have at my feet as I sit at the computer.

Thanks for coming by.

Adelaide

Gillena Cox said...

you tell it really well; enjoyed all your haiku ; sending warm thoughts

much love
gillena

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