Tanka
a brisk autumn walk the muddy blend of colors deepens my mood where are the highlights and bright spots of yesterday? Ribbons:Tanka Cafe
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oh, this wind! it sweeps me past my gate then spins me home spring clean-up- in the sweat of hard work a settling peace solid gray sky- fors...
4 comments:
enjoyed, i particularly like the repeating r's in the verse
much love
gillena
Thanks Gillena. The photo looks like it was shot in black & white, but it wasn't.
Adelaide
Yes, Gillena was right about the "r's" - they add to the "murmurs" in this excellent haiga. Good one, Adelaide.
War
And, a thank you to you, also, Warren.
Adelaide
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