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Monday, August 9, 2010
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a brisk autumn walk the muddy blend of colors deepens my mood where are the highlights and bright spots of yesterday? Ribbons:Tanka Cafe
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oh, this wind! it sweeps me past my gate then spins me home spring clean-up- in the sweat of hard work a settling peace solid gray sky- fors...
11 comments:
A nice haiga Adelaide, a lot to reflect on, ...
beautiful reflective piece the photo says just enough
Thanks so much for dropping in at Lunch breaks "Cinderella Syndrome" i posted upfront today August 11th, your tanka comment of a few days back
much love
gillena
Perfect message for me today! Thank you! Are you the person who has been leaving comments at my painting blog written in Japanese symbols? I couldn't find an email address anywhere to contact you...
Thank you Frank, Gillena and Marina.
Adelaide
Wow, Adelaide! This says SO much. It's funny...I'm still in my twenties (barely) and I already find myself wishing it would all slow down a bit.
thank you Adelaide, i'm so glad you checked in again; i have edited and corrected my posting of your tanka
much love
gillena
Thanks, Kristin and Gillena.Enjoy your youth and your children's youth and create wonderful memories.
Adelaide
Oh yes, Adelaide - I know this feeling ever so well, and you've put it into such beautiful words. A wonderful write!
Warreh
Love the image and the haiku! ;-)
all my best,
Alan
The With Words International Online Haiku Competition 2010: weblink to competition page
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That first line really sets us and the poem up! ;-)
all my best,
Alan
The With Words International Online Haiku Competition 2010: weblink to competition page
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Thank you, Warren and Alan.
happy you visited
Adelaide
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