Thursday, July 8, 2010

REGULARS

At the local Starbucks we meet. The same customers, not every visit, but often. A smile, a wave. “Hello. Hot enough for you? Cold enough?” Small chit-chat. “Live nearby? Have a nice holiday? See you next time.” Ed, Susan, Jim. First names only. Neither friends nor acquaintances, even. Yet…a contact, a welcome, a recognition, a belonging.

unknown wildflowers
blending
into a bouquet

Contemporary Haibun On-line, July 2010

9 comments:

Warren said...

Wonderful haibun, Adelaide - I love your parallelism, vague acquaintances and the wildflowers - terrific!

War

Adelaide said...

Thanks, Warren. With this heat we've been having we've been hiding out there every afternoon. It's a lot cooler than our house.

Adelaide

Frank... said...

A evocotive haibun Adelaide. Thanks for visiting my blog and comments...

Gillena Cox said...

exquisite; a really masterful haibun

have a nice weekend

much love
gillena

Adelaide said...

Thank you Gillena and Frank. Nice to see your blog up and running again, Frank.

Adelaide

Anna Patricia said...

Adelaide, this is very beautiful. I also love your name :)

<3 Pat

Adelaide said...

Thank you, Anna Paatricia.

Adelaide

Lorena said...

lovely essence of the everyday, beautifully done

Adelaide said...

Thank you Lorena. Glad you stopped by.

Adelaide

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