in ancient poems
the highs and lows of desire
and human nature;
my life a repetition
of well-told tales
Ribbons, winter 2010
Tanka
a brisk autumn walk the muddy blend of colors deepens my mood where are the highlights and bright spots of yesterday? Ribbons:Tanka Cafe
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oh, this wind! it sweeps me past my gate then spins me home spring clean-up- in the sweat of hard work a settling peace solid gray sky- fors...
7 comments:
well said, Adelaide :)
I have always felt like that...They have all have said it all so well out there,
wishes,
devika
Thanks, Devika. It's not easy to create something new.
Adelaide
this is lovely, I can totally relate
Thank you, Lorena, for all your comments on so many of my posts.
You are doing great work with those poor animanls at the shelter. We'd love to have a dog, but it wouldn't be fair to the animal since we are out so much of the time, and that includes spontaneous overnight trips.
Adelaide
Nice! So eloquent, this draws the reader in, so they might all relate something from their personal lives.
You ain't just whistling Dixie, sister.
Thank you, Bandit.
And thank you, Gilena.
You posted a comment and when I went to save it, for some reason, it disappeared. Sorry about that, but thanks for stopping by.
Adelaide
I don't know your name, but thank you.
Adelaide
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